…on my virtual and figurative desk. For the first time, a pdf of the ms, then, same day, the actual galleys which I’ll mark; but I can read the pdf on Jane’s Kindle. IF I can get Jane to lend it: she’s got Intruder on it, and is in mid-read—with her usual accompaniment of brilliant suggestions. My readers should know—Jane’s is a real important readthrough, and she often catches what I mean to do, but didn’t do well enough, or actually should have thought of—we’re too good a working relationship for me to cheat and say, “Oh, of course, that’s what I meant!” when the truth is, “Gee, wish I’d thought of that.” Bren’s brilliance is partly Jane’s. 😉 And I always feel a little antsy until she’s finished her read—because if there’s one person in the universe who’ll say, nah, you blew it—she would. It’s that not-cheating thing we observe. So she’s liking it thus far and all’s right with the universe.